by PervOtaku
Please can you make the chapters at least 2 pages?
Other than that, I've enjoyed this entire series so far. Curious who is on a journey here, Gruthsorik or the Doctor, and can't wait to find out
This is really amazing!! I really love your plot and how you write!! Update soon
I'm hoping for more variety in the sex; basically each of these sex scenes seem to go the same way: he penetrates the girl with little or no preparation (ouch!), then penetrates her ass and her mouth and then yay happy orgasms.
I would love to see a scene where the girl was an active participant in the sex. I mean, maybe Gruthsorik hasn't realized this because most girls are afraid of him, but sex is so much more pleasurable when it's not just, as you said above, a hole for him to fill with his cock. I'd be delighted to read Gruthsorik learning the delights of, for instance, being seduced properly, in a bed, with touches and foreplay and somehow him being tied up and subjected to the girl's will. I'll be continuing to read, and hopefully something happens like this please please. :3