All Comments on 'Intimacy'

This was a fantastic start, you're an awesome writer, I could easily visualize everything.I can't wait to see where you take this.

I liked this and hope you'll write more. I'd also like to know the girl's name! :) Seriously, I think there's a good story here and I hope you get to tell it.

tell me there's more somewhere out there!

but I hope there's more? It's not titled anything like a part '01' so I hope you plan on adding more...

Very nice, I'm definitely looking forward to finding out more about this girl. (And the guy, for that matter!) Hope there's more to read soon. :)

you've just written a few stories here but I am a big fan. Your last story was well written and this one is a great start.

Looking forward to more!

I have read the other two stories and I loved them. I hope that there is MORE to this story...

~Black Pearl~

I hope that you will continue the story. Why is she so isolated and whats' up with the dude that was in the frat house? Thanks

waiting for the next installment!

Nicely written.

...you should really really REALLY continue with this amazing story and update pronto. its the first chapter, i'm already hooked and you haven't updated in months...so please update?

-J.

You should definitely continue with this story. I'm loving it.

It's so awesome!

I really hope you continue!

The first chapter is already so addicting!

please, WRITE MORE. it's VERY GOOD.

i kind of feel like a loser, but i check here every time i visit literotica to see if you've updated this fic, your profile, etc.

obviously, people's interests change and things happen in real life that probably take away from your time to write, but i love this story so far. it's interesting, and sexy, and definitely well written, but idk if there's anything else i can do that's short of groveling besides write this comment and hope that it persuades you to finish this one day.

will you come back and finish this exciting story? i hope so it's great!!!

More?

More?

very nice now where is the rest of it??

I love this story and hope that you continue it.

It's rare that I find a story on here that really hooks me. This story is starting out great and you are well on your way. I would love to read more... keep up the good work.

Omg. I can't believe you stopped. You need to finish this story because just from what you have written I can tell that the continuation of this story would be awesome.

reall liked this and though it could definitely stand on its own, i think a continuation would be appreciated. you've introduced casey and piqued our interest. why was he in his room alone at a frat party. what connection did he feel? Have them run into each other again, please. Otherwise, her ending is just too sad/lonely for some of us to bear. it's realistic but heartbreaking.

I relate so well to your main character. As I read I felt you could have been writing about me. I also love the way that your descriptions play like a movie. They are so vivid. I hope there's more.

That was a great start and I would love to see where it goes from here!

If this girl is anything like I predict. She's going to really become more of a social butterfly soon. I would love to read more of this story and hope that she encounters the same guy so they can pick up where they left off. Please continue with the story soon. Syn'

You have wonderful talented that is your writing style is absolutly great. I

am waiting for your next installment to be posted. It seem like to me. She

have a connection with this guy she met at this party. I hope he will

be the one to bring her passion to the surface. I gave you five golden stars.

Thanks again!!!!!

Continue pleaseeee. I can totally relate to the girl !

I'm just curious when are you going to possibly update this story. It has a great beginning and I would love for you to continue. The girl is really intriguing and the guy is mysterious in a good way. I can't wait to see what develops between the two of them. Thanks, Syn'

Please write more!! :)

I really enjoyed this piece here. I'm not surprised so many of us can relate to this. You are an amazing writer. Not many stories hold my attention and evoke the memories of isolation from my youth. Such an honest intimate picture was created in your work. Please don't stop, you have a precious gift for writing.

I'm pretty sure this isn't the end - is it?