All Comments on 'Intimate Time with Sister'

Reads more like a instruction book than a story

All brothers and sisters should experience such uninhabited sex.

...with their clothes on?

Hot story.

Good start to hopefully a long relationship. I would suggest getting a editor that is fluent in English and use them to make it flow better.

Where's the rest?

The first paragraph. Tells the reader that he is attracted to his sister, likes to be the voyeur, wishing and wanting.

LIGHTNING:

Now we learn they've been fucking for a week! I like your stories, I do, but , as a 1 pager the beginning needed to be stronger. JMO , No offence meant. Still a hot one!

Story is made up.

In the desciption, I think you mean he peeked at his sister...

They may have peaked together later...but that another story!

Had raw sex every day.........?? Hmm, don't women have a period every month...

*Peaking at his Sister in the shower leads to intimacy.*

Peaking? How high was he?

Peeking. Get your description right.

.......nothing new, nothing to see here.

Terrible waste of screen space, just a copy of parts of other stories. As for "I could feel my balls starting to fill with cum, which meant I was close to cumming.", this is total bullshit in a story filled with bullshit.

Please don't write any more.

Hot sexy start. They had sex only for the next 3 months, why, what happened? There is more to this story and I hope you will tell us soon.

The ultimate enjoyment is in the last 30 seconds of intercourse when ejaculating sperm into your partner's vagina.

The thought of pulling out is irrational.

Will written because it makes me imagine I am part of the action.

Thank you.