by Dubinsky
...the best of your three stories. Maintain this standard and you'll not go wrong.
Loved the banter and the nicely paced storyline. All three of your stories to date are captivating and highly erotic in different ways. Hope you continue to share from your vivid imagination.
Damn, damn, damn!! This is SO HOT!! I am so wet, and I know I will be getting off later to this story. It is the stuff that fantasies are made to be!!
Superb. Amazingly hot, well-written and all the better for being lean and economical. Sometimes it's good to get a long, involved story and enjoy the characters... And sometimes (when the sex is this hot) you just need to get the bodies connecting. It's red hot and visceral.
Great stuff!