All Comments on 'Into the Forbidden Ch. 02'

Not a badly written story. A little rough around the edges. Could have been more build up to extend it and give your readers time to jack off as they picture you. Getting caught and punished was a nice touch, leading to more I hope. And introducing other characters can be useful in the future. Over all, nicely done.

This is the kind of fresh air that i've been waiting for. I just wish that you had written till the end. The thing I would like the most is the dialogs between father and daughter; and flashbacks of the daughter to her dreams -where her dad fucks her crazy- just when her dad is really mad and is punishing her. I'm looking forward to the rest of the story and to new ones. The more detailed dialogs the better…

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