All Comments on 'Into the Forest'

Too short

Would agree with earlier comment — too short, which for me means that the theme/storyline has potential but is not well/completely developed. Woodland scene, sex and characters fall short — only glimpses. Hope you continue to explore this or other fantasies, but with greater detail, intensity, nuance, depth. Looking forward to more. Thanks for sharing.

Thanks Migbird and illuminatio2dragonis for your feedback! I definitely agree, I'm going to start writing and publishing more world-building focused longform content :D