by DeepDarkFantasies
Interesting little tale but I do have one issue and sadly, it’s kind of a major one.
The sense of scale for the giant. You didn’t really do much to put a picture in my mind of just how big he was, especially compared to our lead, which sucked me entirely out of the sexy parts because instead of focusing on the fuck, I was trying to do the math for how shit was supposed to fit or how deep it went.
Just something to keep in mind for next time