All Comments on 'Into the Woods'

by cleverrgrrrl

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luedonluedonabout 3 years ago

That was different.

Interestingly different.

I liked it.

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Lue

lawoftheheartlawoftheheartabout 3 years ago
go back to lawrence

you're trying too hard. try re-reading Women in Love.

yowseryowserabout 3 years ago

Intriguing

An unusual story, not quite sure that it works, but full points for imagination. Don't know enough about the characters to care for them, root for them. The second person dialogue is always tricky and comes off less than optimally here. But wonderful, lavish descriptions and sensations. Pray continue...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

I enjoyed the unique style of this story. The story makes for a great fantasy. I will definitely check out some of your other writing!

RoJarooRoJarooover 1 year ago

Love it. Hope you're still writing. All of your stories are great.

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