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Gemini_KnightGemini_Knightover 12 years ago
Too short

Nice build-up, and the change of P.o.V.'s was nice to; it's just too short to really get a feel for the characters or the plot,not to mention seriously leave the reader hanging there at the end. But then if you plan on making it a series (and really hope you do), good way of keeping the reader interested. Please continue because I can't wait to see where this goes and what happens next.

crazycujocrazycujoover 12 years ago
continue

can't wait to see where you go with this....HURRY!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
perfect intro

this is such a perfect intro to a great female vampire story! love the sexual domination of this story

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