by Bizzy_Bish
Nice build-up, and the change of P.o.V.'s was nice to; it's just too short to really get a feel for the characters or the plot,not to mention seriously leave the reader hanging there at the end. But then if you plan on making it a series (and really hope you do), good way of keeping the reader interested. Please continue because I can't wait to see where this goes and what happens next.
this is such a perfect intro to a great female vampire story! love the sexual domination of this story