All Comments on 'Invisible Man Ch. 02'

This started as a fascinating story about how a good guy came out on top and then it turned into some over-the-top fantasy. Too bad.

Perfect BTB story. Throughout her life, she exhibits symptoms of a narcissistic personality by using men for own needs. After countless therapy hours and suffering the consequences of a fling with a wannabe actor. She finally open her eyes about her true self. Glad she saw what she gave up when she bump into Eric and Starlight. By the way, what kind of name is Starlight?

Great read

Now this is a BTB story. Excellent work

That is one great story. Starlight is a keeper, and as Louis L’Amour said, “Tonto is a man to ride the river with.”

I re-read this. Still one of the better stories here.

Women like 'Kelly' often survive and even prosper just to prove the World is not fair. While the 'Tontos' and 'Starlites' often appear to 'level the playing field' It isn't always the case and the 'Erics' usually have to beat a new path for themselves. This was a satisfying and entertaining story and well written, and edited! Thank You 5*****

I felt sorry for Kelly. She's portrayed as a typical selfish immature teenager. It's a big mistake to marry someone like that until they've matured. Authors throw in words like narcissistic without knowing what the word actually means. A narcissist is similar in some ways to a sociopath. It's a very serious mental and emotional trait usually found in people in power heads of companies, politicians etc.

This story has it all from sex to satire , and from comic relief to tragic heroism ! I don’t know what else to say as I just fell victim to a serious case of ‘commentary writers block’ 5 stars from me !

Wow, Starlight is a kickass Mama Bear if ever there was one. Her diatribe at the useless one was spot on.

Why was Kelly on disability?

Enjoyed that . 5⭐️

Loved the description of first action by Tonto.

True for most.

Kelly doesn't need anyone to point out she's a manipulative, unfaithful slut. She makes that clear all by herself. Starlite's shaming, criticism and name calling did little to affect Kelly but made Starlite look like mean spirited trailer trash. Eric sure knows how to chose a spouse...picked two winners back to back. Good thing he neither blames nor complains.

really great story, funny, morally strong

Kelly got what her sort deserve.

Thanks for good story

Great story. Thanks

This story is a FANTANSTIC piece of writing!

I was riveted every moment!💥💯💫💥💥💥

Thank, I think from all of us, for such a gift.!!

The lessons of this story were never so appropriate as they DIRECTLY, and correctly, indict the so called- they are a disgrace to the original Feminist movement.

THEIR fate is exactly as you depicted.

Brilliant! Just truly brilliant!!

More than memorable! This was (is) a very good piece of writing with characters you could love and hate. People with real values, moral character, and humility are indeed invisible in our narcissistic self-entitled society. Bravo.

Not for me. Not a fan of the pyscho with a gun cliffhanger. Makes it even worse the janitor has the perfect daughter sitting around waiting for MC

Liked it.

Liked this one a lot. True defition of courage .... Unfortunately, again "No justice served" on the cheating WOO (Waste Of Oxygen)

Some hilarious dialog. Glad no reconciliation etwren Kelly and Eric. She didn't have real remorse. Before the shooter incident l, she thought Eric was being an asshole for kicking her out. Her later 'contrition' was actually conceit and selfish forgiveness of her own sins. Liked the janitor and Starlite. Eric didn't deserve thr crap that was pushed on him buy he made out great in the end.

Thanks for the read. Enjoyed the idea. Probably could have put this all together. Thanks for your writing.

Fun story.

A good solid realistic story. Brings to life what's too true for many. Unfortunately woman like Kelly are abundant..To many men like Eric simping to women make it possible..No idea why more guys Can't see that once you fall into "oh hes just a nice guy/friend" your done as a prospective lover or husband..AS far as it goes that's where you have been designated in a woman's mind forever. Cut her out of your life. Simple solution that works for me and millions of other men,let her know your interested, ask her for a date,ONLY ONCE, If you get negative response, walk away forever,cut ties and forget about her,move on..if you can't do that,you will never get real respect from her if she ever did agree at a later date when she has nothing better on hand. That's 90% true most of the time....Having said that...4 stars for the well written realistic story...JZK..

Glad no reconciliation. Starlite was awesome!He definitely traded up!

Nicely done. It was great to see JoAnn again. She is in another story, too. I love that this author references real events as inspiration. Wish the author still posted on this site.

★★★★★

I loved both parts. Will read other of this author's stories when I have some time to kill, no pun intended.

My biggest question is how the MC could know the woman almost his entire life without noticing she was a self-entitled, shallow, immoral bitch. Oh, that's right .. she had huge tits that overwhelmed his tiny brain. IMO, they both had the emotional depth of a thimble and the maturity of a leftist.

Well hiding from your wife just makes you look weak, like your afraid of getting your feelings hurt if you were to face her.

Cute -- and an original take on the old "cheating bitch got what she deserved theme" so 5* from me.

Hilarious at times but also dramatic. Starlite rocks!

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Would have enjoyed much more about Starlite instead of Kelly. She was the old news ho.