All Comments on 'Invitation to Paradise'

That was a very well crafted story and you had the pace of it perfect. I loved the mystery build up. I suspect Bradley may receive some more 'invitations'.

Your work is always very exciting to read. It was hot with a lot of great action and I love the way that you describe things. Keep it up

Glad to see one of your stories. Always enjoy your mature writing. This was a great read, but I must say that you should write a story with titled (THE LIGHTS OF BLISS IN THE HORIZON OF THEIR MIND) I Love that phrase!! Thanks for sharing.

I'm going back to reread your earlier stories. As a senior myself, you capture the feelings of us "old folks". Keep writing. Love your storytelling.

I've always enjoyed your stories. This one is also very good. Us older folk do have some teaching to do with the younger generation, what better way for them to learn properly. I'm sure she enjoyed his young cock many times after that first encounter. So nice to see an older woman who is not bashful about wanting sex.Life is too short not to enjoy a healthy sex life, it's good for you!

Ann like all of your stories you just can’t put it down. I wish you would write more stories. Like I said I wish you would write more.

As always, your stories draw the reader in and hold them. Another jewel from a very good author. Thank you.

Once again deserves more than 5stars. Realistic telling of real life situation that

describes that just because you reach a certain age, desires and feelings don’t

just disappear

Love the story! Young man and sensual older women teaching him what making love really is about. I wish that I had met Maureen when I was Bradley’s age.

I liked the characters and the story. It felt realistic to me. Thanks.

Quit after that.

I enjoy reading stories of older women fucking young men. We are constantly bombarded with older men seeking young women, but seldom see these precious older women realizing their fantasy of taking a young cock once again. I lost my virginity at 15 years of age to a much older woman and it was the best sex I've ever had. She really taught me how to please a woman and I've never forgotten it! I give this a 5 star!

Great story telling and realistic setup to the coupling. My only question is where were these women with aggressive sex drives when I was in my early 20's?

really enjoyed the story, thank you

Very lovely and with some very inspired whit too. Thank you for sharing this with us Anne!

As an “older” man who can vividly remember the first time a woman reached up under my shirt and squeezed my nipple and made me unload, i love your including the mature women awakening their prey to how sensitive a mans nipples can be. Your stories are well written and very realistic.

As a huge fan of your work, I was worried that something had happened to you. I think it would be great if every young man had a Maureen to teach him how to really please a woman.

Once again well crafted and bringing memories to life again

What a fine, well written story!

I love the way you bring the readers in to the story. The older Lady teaching the younger men should happen more in real life. I had several 'older Ladies' teach me to be a better lover and I thank them. Keep writing and we will keep reading

I enjoyed the heroin who was confident enough to let him off before the start, and keep him over his obligation. Thanks.

As someone who has had a thing for older women as long as I can remember I really enjoyed this story. Somewhat reminded me of my first relationship with a cougar. Excellent read.

A very nice slow build up to what becomes a rather beautiful and intensely sexy story. Maureen is a great creation. She knows what she wants and is experienced enough to be blissfully free of the kind of possessiveness, angst and insecurity that too frequently plagues younger women. I'm now a fair bit older than Bradley, but when I was his age, I used to dream of an encounter with a confident older woman. Never happened, but it's wonderful to read! 😀

As always. You never disappoint your readers. Quite the romantic story. Bradley is one lucky young lad.

I’m never sure what I’m going to get when I see that you wrote another story, but I am always very pleased a few pages later. Loved the characters. The attention to detail that makes it feel real. Thanks fora great story.

There are few authors on here that I know by name and actively search out. You are one of them. You consistently create robust and believable characters with a minimal amount of distraction from the central storyline. This story was true to that standard of excellence.

Haven’t seen your name in months, but knew I was in for a treat today. I read a bit about you before and am even more pleased that you can depict such joyous human behavior from a more mature viewpoint. I am one month away from my 80th birthday and am married to a spectacularly wonderful woman of 45. Our loving is perfect, often spiced up by fantasies of another couple joining us and sharing what we have found together. It may never happen but I can see you having the imagination and humorous approach to life which would be perfect for our first time with others. Shall I reach out to you in some way?

Another great one! Such sexual heat in that imagination of yours!

Every young man's dream was fulfilled with Bradley in this story. Loved it!

I loved your work on "ASSTR.org" before that site went kablooie and became a ghost town.

Happy to see you found a new home and are still writing. :D

Looking forward to your next creations!

Wonderful story, thank you. Great to have someone appreciate that life and love does not finish at 50. Marie

Thank you for writing!.

Hi,

I just wanted to take a moment to thank all of you who left a comment. As with those who responded via email, I tried to send you a personal thanks, but every time I tried, I got "sorry, cannot send a mail to XXXX." I don't know if that's from your personal settings or something of mine, but I did want you to know your comments were read and appreciated.

Ann Douglas

Another great story from you Ann. Very enjoyable and entertaining to say the least. This is something that any young man experiencing it would remember for a long time, maybe forever. I loved the way he went through his memory trying to determine which woman at the table was Maureen. Thanks.

Delightful!

Great Story. Nothing old pussy, experience is priceless. Young dog can always learn new trick from a seasoned lady.

A story like this should be required reading for both young men and mature women, of course anyone who wants to could learn something from this and many of your other stories. The characters seem to be drawn from real life, not too handsome, beautiful, rich or any other extreme. To plagiarize a song title: "It shoulda been me"

Not the mature story I usually read but immensely enjoyable. Especially loved the ending. Thanks.

Just a good young mans dream, so many of us just wished it had happened to us, time after time....

Well now we need to hear about Maureen and Timothy.

I loved it Ann!

Reminds me of a younger, guitar playing Jack being propositioned by older, sexy and horny ladies in Vegas hotels- back when they had keys with the room number on them. I loved the look on their faces when the key was passed to a more than willing Jack......

Regards

Jack

Excellent story!

Was hoping for part 2, but the ending was very good.

So sexy, that was hot. I wish that was me, I would be over the moon if I could be like that in my sixties. I believe that was the author and that was something she as done recently.

Wow how hot was that. I bet that was the author recently. I hope that I am like that in my sixties.

Great, love the 'ending'!

Very fun and sweet.

Your storytelling is so well arranged, articulated and paced it is seductive in itself.

Great story. One that brought me to the first time I made love with my wife. I'm 74 an she's 70. So forget loosing the urge as you get older. It just takes a little longer to reach orgasm but I've paid attention and brought her to orgasm each and every time, something other lovers haven't taken the time to accomplish.

Love that older hairy pussy. Some young guys have no idea what they are missing by turning down an older hot woman. As a young man of about 20, I was shocked that a couple of older women (about 70 years old) would proposition me. I had always thought that pussy my age was best. But, little did I know that some of the wettest sweetest pussy have grey hair. Now, in my 70's, I know just how good it is.

Good premise.

Nice buildup.

But once the sex started, it zoomed. Needed much more in the way of preliminaries/foreplay.

Some extended playing with his cock and his balls.

Perhaps, after he'd showed that he liked her breasts, some titty fucking and mouth action on the head of his cock on the upstrokes.

The 'eating-pussy-lesson' really wasn't a lesson. He jumped right in. Needed some preliminaries, playing with it, kissing around it, kissing it, onstructions when to begin using his tongue -- and where, and how.

Four stars.

Great story: the writing is excellent, good pace, good sex descriptions, and a couple of laugh-out-louds, which I consider essential for this genre. I am particularly drawn to truly female-positive writing, where the women are believable agents, not just objects, which I have had a hard time finding on this site. (So sad.) I am new at this, just posted my first story, which I believe you might like, and I would welcome any feedback you might care to offer. A new fan, WillJack (an old[ish] hetero married guy).