All Comments on 'Iris Ch. 01'

by rainydaydance

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LeaHarvey1821LeaHarvey1821over 9 years ago
Nicely done.

The fact that this was a mix of vampire, best friend, first time, it was put together so well that it was easy to read and was believable. You did a very good job of making the characters easy to get to know. This was a nicely written story.

germanchocolate4ugermanchocolate4uover 9 years ago

Short & sweet - very entertaining

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Loved It

More please. You are such a tease! But I love to be teased ;)

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