by Wanda_5
Good start, if a little brutal.
Look forward to the next chapter
I gave stars for accommodating to a variety of readers from different cultural and geological backgrounds. I wish more writers would do so.
Also, your just great writer. :)
This story has to be a common man's fantasy. It has everything fantasical so readers shouldn't complain if they don't find elements of reality in it.
The location of Russia does little except add to the intrigue and suspense of the plot. People who are unknown are a lot less predictable and the story much more interesting.
A good job by the author, I would like to see more stories to analyse the plot.
I have to admit that I never thought of opening this up but when I saw the scores that it had run open I did. I am now a bit curious and will continue on...
...but haven't done that, at least not yet! I, indeed visited Irkutsk back in 1997, and I found the city itself to be quite charming, but then, I was not kidnapped and raped on my visit either. I hope the author gets to describe Lake Baikul more, as I found this lake to be quite fascinating.
YOMEYO