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All Comments on 'Iron Hog & The Siege of The Elves'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

You need an editor. First thing you should look for. Second is a better intro. Try some world building. Nothing in that short beginning grabbed my interest enough to continue with the old man's monologue/story.

TangoUglyTangoUglyalmost 2 years ago

This basically plays out like a hentai doujin; short, sweet and out of this world levels of stupidity.

God I love this stuff.

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