by fsqueeze
I'll neve look at butch lesbians the same...story was great exceptionally well written.
This story is a perfect example of why the Taboo category should be separated from Incest. Everything pulling them together is forbidden by his profession and society in general.
Next please
The best I always waited for someone to write something like this, wish you can make
more and many applause
A very good story that's not nearly complete! I look forward to more! Thank you!
There's a knack to creating a sense of the exotic along with the erotic. Go too far, and the story becomes difficult to relate to - too far outside ordinary experience. But hit it just right, and it's completely plausible, completely understandable - it becomes more, not less real as a result of bringing the unusual, the ambiguous and the slightly "other" into focus.
Good start ... looking forward to more.