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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Tense and presence need tweeking.

Please Read your text aloud and watch for the errors before submitting.

The basis of the story is VERY INTERESTING and most worthy of expansion.

I enjoy where your creativity has taken 'me' and await subsequent chapters.

BrendaNWBrendaNWover 2 years ago

I would have been crying tears of joy thanking God .. but hoping that it is not a dream .. but a long said prayer answered

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