All Comments on 'Is that Who I Think it is?'

The story feels somewhat detached and impersonal, with the siblings simply going through the motions without any emotional engagement.

The move to effectively become a prostitute and have sex back home with her brother has as much thought / emotional turmoil as if choosing a bar of chocolate.

Try to capture this and it will help the story.

Bit of slack pussy it needs to get a bit of "umph" I lost the meaning of fuck sadly.

you left us hanging..need to finish and/or add another chapter

a whore story? how is that hot? sicko...