All Comments on 'Is There Recrimination Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Men simply aren't telepaths

A very interesting story, though one sided as we're only getting Ashkey's viewpoint. I don't see how this behavior of Ashkey's can end in anything but a disaster for their relationship. There's no communication between her and her husband, so her musings about what her husband might think or do are futile, and indeed, quite selfish. Misplacing blame for her actions on her husband is very unfair.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
The episodes are all

out of order.

and it is VERY annoying. Ashkey has been fucking Hank for ages, and now she just meets him??

Nightowl21Nightowl21almost 20 years ago
Another slut

At least 60%, maybe 70%, of wives must be sluts. Otherwise why would so many writers have this idea?

KOLKOREKOLKOREabout 16 years ago
Totally incoherent

I apologize, despite my promise I was still curious (perhaps the title led me on) and read the last chapter. It was the least coherent of all. Nothing moved forward, not to mention resolved. Why won't you right a draft with an outline of a plot before you get on with the actuall writing? Just a suggestion.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Fuck this is bad

don't drink and write honey, your storyline gets totally confused

RePhilRePhilalmost 13 years ago
Proof Positive

That women are basically life support systems for their Cunts. She had Absolutley no other redeeming qualities worth mentioning. Very nice writing style, well paced and nice flow to the story. Keep writing

tazz317tazz317over 12 years ago
ITS NOT DIFFICULT TO BE A HATEFUL BITCH

but get that way for the right reason not a made up one,, TK U MLJ LV NV

jezzazjezzazover 10 years ago

I honestly, for the life of me, cannot understand the point of this story apart to put forward a woman's justifications for cheating?

I mean, for gods sake, the woman doesn't actually appear to understand the concept of talking to her husband? What happened to a conversation??

Instead she just fondly imagines what her husband is thinking / doing in a way that it makes what she is doing "ok", when it's not.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
No Recrimination for Hau

What a ridiculous story nothing but a load of twaddle to excuse the fact the wife is a cheating bitch.

EddboyEddboyabout 9 years ago
this is what you get

when a woman attempts to write a story about infidelity. Its either fine because hubby doesnt find out, or its the husbands fault bc he's not attentive or doesnt light her fire in bed. Now Patricia51 has a couple of legit cheating wives stories and i enjoy Karen E's comments but thats about it

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
No stars

Cunt!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
WHAT PIECE OF SHIT

Desparate whore whinning cunt wife shit storues on 5his site is not erotic stop bitching twat.

26thNC26thNCalmost 5 years ago
What

What in hell did I just read? All I got was something about an Ashtray cheating with Hank.

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