by robin35
A very interesting story, though one sided as we're only getting Ashkey's viewpoint. I don't see how this behavior of Ashkey's can end in anything but a disaster for their relationship. There's no communication between her and her husband, so her musings about what her husband might think or do are futile, and indeed, quite selfish. Misplacing blame for her actions on her husband is very unfair.
out of order.
and it is VERY annoying. Ashkey has been fucking Hank for ages, and now she just meets him??
At least 60%, maybe 70%, of wives must be sluts. Otherwise why would so many writers have this idea?
I apologize, despite my promise I was still curious (perhaps the title led me on) and read the last chapter. It was the least coherent of all. Nothing moved forward, not to mention resolved. Why won't you right a draft with an outline of a plot before you get on with the actuall writing? Just a suggestion.
don't drink and write honey, your storyline gets totally confused
That women are basically life support systems for their Cunts. She had Absolutley no other redeeming qualities worth mentioning. Very nice writing style, well paced and nice flow to the story. Keep writing
but get that way for the right reason not a made up one,, TK U MLJ LV NV
I honestly, for the life of me, cannot understand the point of this story apart to put forward a woman's justifications for cheating?
I mean, for gods sake, the woman doesn't actually appear to understand the concept of talking to her husband? What happened to a conversation??
Instead she just fondly imagines what her husband is thinking / doing in a way that it makes what she is doing "ok", when it's not.
What a ridiculous story nothing but a load of twaddle to excuse the fact the wife is a cheating bitch.
when a woman attempts to write a story about infidelity. Its either fine because hubby doesnt find out, or its the husbands fault bc he's not attentive or doesnt light her fire in bed. Now Patricia51 has a couple of legit cheating wives stories and i enjoy Karen E's comments but thats about it
Desparate whore whinning cunt wife shit storues on 5his site is not erotic stop bitching twat.
What in hell did I just read? All I got was something about an Ashtray cheating with Hank.