All Comments on 'Isabelle & Simon Ch. 05'

Awaiting more

Needs more pages

Slow burner is an understatement! Hopefully all the waiting & short chapters will be worth it! At the rate this is going there will be 100 chapters!

Now things are starting to build up nicely. love how things are going, and these kinds of events are well with in the realm of reality... though some people would be scoffing and thinking "let them suffer. They deserve it." but in this Simon is taking the right approach. Yeah big sis was a bitch and a piece of shit towards him but he knows fully that it was mostly because of the jerks that she was hanging out with.

Chapter 6 has been submitted! It is also the longest chapter so far of the series!

Thanks! More is on the way.

Excellent stuff, looking forward to more, much more.

Thanks for this great story, it is building nicely.

Pretty good, but not great or fantastic. I found multiple instances where you punctuated a sentence with an exclamation mark when it would have made more sense to just use a period. The same thing happened in some of Simon's dialog too. There were times when Simon should have been less excited and speaking normally. I probably could have easily voted 3 here, but I gave it 4/5 anyway.