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Click hereHis words acted like a trigger, sending a signal to her pussy. She squeezed down and rode his cock as he filled her over and over.
"I love you Dillon." She gasped out before her world shattered.
Dillon's determination to drive her mad was paying off. Lights sparked behind her eyes and her body curled up to accept him as she came, shattering into a million pieces while Dillon's body rocked into hers.
The loud roar in her ears signaled Dillon's release. He pumped into her, coming deep inside her pussy while her fingers dug into his shoulders.
Isabelle's body continued to contract, rippling and tingling around Dillon. Their breathing finally slowed but he did not release her or move away. She watched him as he struggled to regain some semblance of control. She was not so lucky; she knew she would never be in control again.
Dillon lowered her legs but did not pull out of her, instead he settled himself between her legs, resting his weight on his elbows. He stared at her with smoky gray eyes and then smiled softly.
"I love you Isabelle. I always have, I just had to find you." He leaned down and kissed her gently, showing her how much he cared in one kiss.
Dillon's declaration took her breath away. Staring back at him was all she could manage as a rush of emotions surged through her. Oh Lord, she loved this man, she didn't know how it happened or why, but she didn't care. He was everything she needed and more, including the added benefit of being able to communicate with him telepathically, although that was a little strange and would take some getting used to.
Isabelle knew her life had changed forever. A life she now looked forward to, full of discovering everything about him, of nights spent in ecstasy, and a love so incredible she would never be the same.
Sighing in satisfaction she pulled Dillon back down towards her and claimed his mouth for another kiss. He held her close and kissed her back with all the passion and love he held inside for her.
Mine Isabelle.
And you are mine Dillon.
Isabelle smiled to herself and shot a quick mental image to Dillon before curling up next to him on the bed. He howled in outrage.
"What exactly does that mean?" he questioned.
"I guess you'll just have to wait and see," she answered sweetly before scrambling off the bed to run.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 10 years agoTheses chapters hAve been so intoxicating. I have a new drug. Please write a series of books. There is a market for this. You have great talent. And I will always be buying your books.
Jasmine30over 11 years agoAuthorThank you for your comments, however, Isabelle and Dillon's story is not over yet. Don't count Isabelle out as a mother just yet!
Anonymousover 11 years agoI hated the idea that he was willing to make her give up her children for him. This is fiction. Isn't there some way he could have found to let her keep them and him too. There should never be a time when a mother gives up her kids for anything. Having children is a sacred promise and a mother should be willing to give up her life for them. An all encompassing love is good, but the bond between a good mother, which you have portrayed, and her children is more.
mapili50almost 12 years agoI registered just so I could send a comment! I'd ear-marked this story 2 years ago but never read it. Recently I read the Fifty Shades of Grey trilogy and have been totally obsessed. Started reading this and COULD NOT PUT IT DOWN. This story is hotter, but doesn't have the romance of Fifty Shades.
The only thing I would've preferred is Isabelle single with no kids. For me, the family thing added too much mental baggage (Isabelle divorces, but how would their sex be with 3 kids sleeping next door? etc.)
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoFirst in response to 'concerning critiquem' I think this was an amzingly written wonderful story. It dose not only bored middle aged wifes I am a 20 (almost 21) year old who absolutly LOVES this story just because it isnt your cup of tea dosent mean its any less entertaining and wonderfully written.
Second, To the Author I think you did a wonderful job with this story it was amazing and erotic and a fun read. My and my guy wound up acting a few sceans from parts 1 through 5 and are quite looking forward to what happens next. We are also intrigued to see what happens between Isabelle and Dillon in the future and how Isabelle deals with her husband and kids. Im actully hopeing she ends up divorceing said husband with joint custody of the kids insted of running off with Dillon (which is what my boyfreind wants) because then she still has her kids, gets an amazing life with Dillon and her husband gets the chance to get over her and find someone else for himself insted of being broken hearted and looking for his "missing" wife.
Anonymousabout 12 years agoGreat body of work, Jasmine (pun definitely intended)! The Isabelle series is especially good. You have a way of pulling the reader right into the story. That talent is not as common as some might think.
The 'critique' posted earlier was entertaining too, but for completely different reasons. I find it both amazing and sad that some people read erotic fiction and are troubled by the fact that the story is erotic and ficticious. Such fools! Such folly!
He or she then goes on to suggest that Isabelle was supposed to overcome her impulses, not embrace them. Apparently this person has the notion that 'good' storylines are formulaic and any deviation is 'bad'. Following that line of 'reasoning', the most riveting stories are those in which the development and outcome are predictable. Such idiocy!
I could go on, but I think that person's processing is punishment enough.
I look forward to your future offerings. Keep up the good work.
Jasmine30about 12 years agoAuthorSeriously, resorting to critiquing erotica? And I'm the pathetic vagina. Hmmm, dude this is entertainment, not high quality literature. And it's she'll, not shell.
Anonymousabout 12 years agoI'd compare this story to traditional pornography. The sleazy bits are great but any attempt at a serious narrative is laughable.
There are considerations people have concerning main characters and it is that they must overcome something. We are presented a character with a sexual weaknss that puts at risk many things. At the end, the character doesn't overcome it. She embraces it.
A sad ending, but why doesn't it work? For one, its not tragic. The character is happy being a submissive person with no autonomy nor self control. Its impossible to empathize with someone so pathetic. The other character is also the obvious representation of an erotic fantasy meaning he's idealized as some form of sex god. He's about as able to provoke sympathy as a pair of fake tits. Far from human, the extraterrestrial comment would have made this more valuable as a piece of literature. I mean telepathy through vagina? How fucking corny is that? It could have been used as a metaphor for her sex drive trumping any semblence of sound reasoning or humanity she may have had, but nah. Just a testimony of how much they grew to love each other through rape.
This at the end is really some 'love' overcomes everything story. Obviously from the mind of a woman that likes the comfort of believing that slavish subjugation is the cost of a perfect mans heart. In the end the supposed happy ending of this is finding out that dillon loves her. Were supposed to read this with a battered wife mentality: withstand the abuse! He said something sweet and he's god therefore yay. The pornography is great but this would have been a superb piece of writing if the author didn't allow her vagina to overpower any cerebral or moral impetus she may have as a writer. Till then, shell be cast into nothingness to be read by bored middle aged wives with rape fantasies.
