All Comments on 'Island Girl'

and you had help editing this....

Great story until the end. The whole "Oh, by the way,you have to pay or I'll blackmail you if you don't" is a bunch of crap. Completely out of character with the rest of the story. There were so many other ways that the story could end that would have been hot and not a turn-off.

Shite is IT!--Where's the LUV?

this story was lame because it was all about taking advantage of a woman and tricking and bribing her. did nothing for me.