All Comments on 'Island Magic'

Love the story. I think it is very good. AAAAA++++

i came while reading. awesome!

Outstanding story!!

Page 1 and I had already added this to my favorites. All of my favorite categories, combined with some mind-boggling writing, loved it. No second thoughts on 5-starring this

Great story! Thank you

With no form of birth control how did they not get pregnant

I'm surprised the women didn't greet pregnant.

Part 2 where he impregnates both!

Well done for your first story. Five stars!

Good story, except for wimpy ending a good read. If this is your first submission please continue with new subjects.

The story, what there was of it was good. It shows up as having 5 pages but only 2 are shown. Page 3, 4, and 5 are there but the story text is not there.

Thanks for the a2m warning tag, saved me reading five pages of disgusting and patently idiotic behavior, especially shipwrecked with no access to health care.

Do a follow up with the the two getting pregnant !

Fantastic !!!

Fantastic story especially for your first. Please keep going and tell us what happens when they return to civilisation. I too am surprised there were no babies.

Stupid.

And of course anal just had to be in there.

1 star.

Bill S.

For a first story 5 stars, hell for a 10th story 5 stars. Well written and kept you reading.

wish there were more suduction. sex felt a bit rushed, was writen well but no much story to be honest 3 stars still

I am surprised that both have not had at least one child - rescued with a babes in arms and 2 in the oven.

no babies was a disappointment.

Great story I really injoyed. I joined up because of it and saved it for future readings.

Damn I can't believe this is the only story you've written, that was crazy good quality!

Too hot,Do write more or a sequel to this.......Lover ur work

A 5 star rating means I got off on the story, thanks. Please write more.

Excellent story! Damn the fools who didn't like it.

Good story BUT I thought the ending finished far to abruptly plus with all the fucking they did how the hell didn’t they fall pregnant. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

well written, sensuous, paradise for all three,

What happened when they returned? They must have been challenged by the change in circumstances. Were they able to be so intimate with each other?

Great story. Look forward to more from you

Well I really liked this story, but it ended to soon. There was alot not gone into. A one paragraph epilogue is not enough.

Was anyone looking for them for the years they were gone, did they have a place to go back to, did they end up pregnant.

You left alot unsaid, what a shame.

You are a very good writer, your other story ended to soon too.

I liked it until the end. There was no way with all that sex that they didn't get pregnant. Eventhough the kids were sexually active before they wrecked, they let mom have control, that was cool and best was that Tommy didn't turn Alpha.

You ended it to abruptly, you at least needed to have sister take it up the butt. Mom doing anal was hot but I held off cumming for Tom to ruin his sisters ass and you just ended it. That sucked... I say have them get a new boat, close up their life and stock up the boat, then go back being able to leave when and if they want.

Too quick to end this story like that!! Sister still had anal to undergo, like mom did!!

Figured they would eventually be rescued, but not quite THAT quickly...

Sequel could talk about life AFTER the island...did the magic follow them home...????

Five**5**Stars....and, again where is the sequel??

Its orait. But wat is "love" without being able to create a family together? What, do I mean to say is why isn't both woman pregnant and having babys.

This to me was just Fun Fantasy the way Literotica was and is meant to be.

Splashwet

Started off promising, but turned completely juvenile by the second page. Consider it a practice piece, to be removed when you create something better, later

How did they manage not to get pregnant is the first thing someone should ask

How did the mom and daughter not have the son/brother baby or at least figure out that there both knocked up with his baby or babies since they had no birth control or condoms so they’re no doubt that if they were being interviewed about there rescue and there harrowing ordeal you would think that on the camera interview they would be having baby bumps or at least they sister if they mom had her tubes tied you should do a illustrated version of this but maybe we’re they find out that there both pregnant with twins. Granted this story kinda reminds me of my boss and her son and daughter or my ex girlfriend Avery and her mom

very sexy especially threesomemum daughter 69 with son fucking sister