All Comments on 'Island Man'

Too long, too boring, too stupid...

That was amazing. Cuckoldry at it's finest. I just love your writing.

I admit I read the whole thing, but I didn't like it. A cuckold situation is cool, but this was mostly cruel.

too long should be broken down into 2 or 3 submissions.

So much effort for a boring repetitive story

This was so cruel to the husband. And he was so emasculated that after a while, I had no sympathy for him at all. The wife had no redeeming qualities either. Can’t say I liked the trajectory of this story.

I know the original story of suewatcher.

You made it better although I’m not happy with all changes, like the tattoo or the end. I hoped you’ll continue with the second part of Susan’s island man.

Keep on going. I bet “the trip” could need a makeover. Thanks for your work, I enjoyed it.

Love to see a Redux of Dream Man plus a part two. Go for it!

Thanks @suewatcher, I’m such a huge fan of your work! I didn’t plan on doing anything with part 2, but maybe! I really hope you publish again!

@Suewatcher: I totally agree! Would be great to read new stuff from you! You’re a legend!