All Comments on 'Isolated Love Ch. 03'

This story is awesome. Keep the chapters coming at this great pace

See, I knew you could easily do better. Nice chapter.

You can write.

Five.

You are doing great, an error here and there but nothing to take away from the story.

I knew Benji was going to continue to act an ass when he saw Arabeth again. He was jealous seeing her talking to Grayson. Now Arabeth just need to let go of that fool and don't let that asshole make her run. He gets off on bullying people.

Please don't let that be Grayson's ex calling him. He need to stay strong too.

Love, love, love this story so far!!! Please keep the chapters coming. in dire need of reading more. Great Job so far lait'yaka. Mistakes here and there but a wonderful read nontheless.

I love Grayson!!!

Keep writing this story is developing very well. There was a few mistakes in editing but it doesn't take away from the story, which is GREAT!

I thought I had an editor.. but I have no idea where they went to so once again, I'm without an editor BUT... We'll see. Chapter four is already done it just needs to be EDITED. I'll post it soon guys.

xx

ERC

You really do need an editor, it would be so much better if it was edited.

Grayson reminds me of my hubby. They have very similar wit and sense of humor. ^^

I wouldn't go THAT far. I don't like Gray's taste in music. More of a metal head, myself. \m/

BDP loves Amaranthe and Holyhell, too. Just thought I'd share that. Hell, she got ME into Amaranthe, even though I'm not a huge fan of pop. Ok, she just smacked me upside the head and corrected me. It's pop-metal. Go figure! She also has a crush on James Hetfield. :P

But, I have to say that this is a great tale so far, and please keep it moving! My wife and I love the fast pace of getting it written and posted. Editing would be a plus, but don't worry about it too much. It's still a great tale the way it is. :)

5 Solid Stars. Looking forward to the next one, too.

Your awesome!! .. The characters are very well written... Love this story so far .. Keep it up looking forward to your next installment .....

Oh my! I'm guessing that's Grayson's ex calling him. I love the chemistry between Arabeth and Grayson. Please put out Ch. 04 soon!