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Grayson had made it back to the apartment safely and after calling Arabeth to make sure she'd made it in safely, he decided to get ready for bed since work would be coming early morning.
♪ I say high, you say low
You say why, and I say I don't know, oh no
You say goodbye and I say hello...♪
Just as he was settling into bed, his phone went off and he grabbed it from the bedside table. Not even bothering to check the I.D., he answered. "Grayson."
"Hi, it's me... Can we talk? I miss you... so much."
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- COMMENTS
Janez9almost 10 years agoOh my! I'm guessing that's Grayson's ex calling him. I love the chemistry between Arabeth and Grayson. Please put out Ch. 04 soon!
KelisKlausealmost 10 years agoYour awesome!! .. The characters are very well written... Love this story so far .. Keep it up looking forward to your next installment .....
IronDragonalmost 10 years agoI wouldn't go THAT far. I don't like Gray's taste in music. More of a metal head, myself. \m/
BDP loves Amaranthe and Holyhell, too. Just thought I'd share that. Hell, she got ME into Amaranthe, even though I'm not a huge fan of pop. Ok, she just smacked me upside the head and corrected me. It's pop-metal. Go figure! She also has a crush on James Hetfield. :P
But, I have to say that this is a great tale so far, and please keep it moving! My wife and I love the fast pace of getting it written and posted. Editing would be a plus, but don't worry about it too much. It's still a great tale the way it is. :)
5 Solid Stars. Looking forward to the next one, too.
Black_Dragon_Princessalmost 10 years agoGrayson reminds me of my hubby. They have very similar wit and sense of humor. ^^
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoYou really do need an editor, it would be so much better if it was edited.
GiveMeLovealmost 10 years agoAuthorI thought I had an editor.. but I have no idea where they went to so once again, I'm without an editor BUT... We'll see. Chapter four is already done it just needs to be EDITED. I'll post it soon guys.
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Anonymousalmost 10 years agoKeep writing this story is developing very well. There was a few mistakes in editing but it doesn't take away from the story, which is GREAT!
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoLove, love, love this story so far!!! Please keep the chapters coming. in dire need of reading more. Great Job so far lait'yaka. Mistakes here and there but a wonderful read nontheless.
ariesgirlalmost 10 years agoYou are doing great, an error here and there but nothing to take away from the story.
I knew Benji was going to continue to act an ass when he saw Arabeth again. He was jealous seeing her talking to Grayson. Now Arabeth just need to let go of that fool and don't let that asshole make her run. He gets off on bullying people.
Please don't let that be Grayson's ex calling him. He need to stay strong too.
