All Comments on 'It Ain't Paranoia if... Ch. 03'

Damn, this is exciting as hell. The suspense is killing me and I want to thank you for that wonderful sex scene, just picturing Kaitlyn In my mind was so hot.

Great story.

I really wish you would wait until you had the entire story written before you submit it. This constant waiting for the rest of the story sucks.

Great "JR" moment! Really a good story and you spin a yarn about as well as any I have read. Looking forward to the next installment. Thanks for sharing your fantasies and writing talent.

Cheers

SAGE

Brilliant, can hardly wait for the next chapter.

007 silly but great fun.

He can afford a 250 ft bridge but only has enough food for the planned crew size for a month? Seems like pretty poor planning. He did at least note his electronics might be vulnerable although a prudent man would have them all already hardened against EMP.

Oh just fuck off

Enjoyable but a little hokey, meaning not believable.

Keep it coming. Good fun.

Yes, an entertaining story well told. Still, she cheated, left him with the kids and moved in with her lover and after five years it only takes a few days, a naked body and he's fucking the slut again? That seems very silly to me!

Good chapter!

5

Story isn't bad, but the cuck spin is nauseating, as they prepare to reap another ripple of her infidelity. ⭐⭐⭐

good story aside from the protagonist being a spineless cuck

You'd think they were in the Sandbox fighting the Taliban. Our MC is too trusting of his ex, everything he has been showing and sharing since she showed up with the kids. And now he's bopping her! Who knows?

On with the battle!

One more sentence problem: "Sounds you have a pretty good handle on your... foibles

Oh, the sex scene was way to long, t detracts form the story.

Rolling along nicely. 5 from me.

Building in excitement, well done. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Enjoying it again. Still 5 in my mind.

Sex element WAY to over the top.

Prediction: The Ex is working for the Cartel.