All Comments on 'It Ain't Paranoia if... Ch. 04'

Nice twist, can't wait for the next chapter.

Strange one this, obviously very unbelievable but it's been a fun read. But the two main characters just come across as very shallow. I do wonder if she wasn't the most amazing prefect female ever created whether he would even look at her again after what she did.

So help me after all this time if this turns out to be another BTB crap this is one Texan I will kick to the curb. I can get that simple minded drool elsewhere from much less talented authors. You are above that.

Enjoyed this episode very much and looking forward to the next. Just have a bad feeling!

Cheers

SAGE

Please don't make her a cheater again.

Excellent! Loving every chapter of your story. 5 BIG FAT STARS!

What new horrible and treacherous betrayal lurks around the next corner ? I was really hopeful that a happy ending was possible but now I can’t even imagine what will transpire.

What a cluster

Helluva yarn

Her head can obviously be turned... I won't be surprised at whatever is coming.

Now it’s really getting twisted. I’m wondering how Kaitlyn learned to operate guns, and the identity of the investigator she hired to find Rob. Somehow I think Clay had a hand in her appearance on Rob’s doorstep, when she first arrived.

good tale,believably scripted,to bad its unfinished, you stated the completion will be forth coming in a few days. judging by other comments its been already at least 9 days so I will see if i can find it. if i cant i guess i will not know the ending henceforth i wasted my time. I personally do not think any unfinished story should be allowed to be entered.

It’s still ‘pending’

Great story, just don't like that it seems as if he's going to end up back together with his ex-wife. I like that he walked away from her but not that he couldn't move on from her. I don't trust her but don't think he should BTB. There has to be something in between BTB and RAAC.

Much better. The country and roads are all correct. I know that country better than most. Much is like a fantasy, just not very believable but entertaining.

Good chapter!

5

good story aside from the protagonist being a spineless cuck

Looks life the ex is screwing around again, once a cheater..................but maybe I'm wrong RAACs don't always work but BTBs do...................

Now what's going on with Kaitlyn? They're putting a plan together to help him, IMO.

Interesting, nice suspense. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Still enjoying it.

God I hate will she, won't she's. I don't trust women who cheat more than once. Get drunk and or drugged once and make a mistake - maybe forgiveable. Treat you like shit, multiple liaisons.... She's GONE!!!