All Comments on 'It Ain't Paranoia if... Pt. 02 Ch. 01'

Glad you continued the original...but most of this is merely a rehash of the last episode of the previous story train. hope to see some new stuff in second installment..

3 stars for word for word rehash of the sex scenes...

After reading the original chapters, this minimal effort let me down.

A hit and miss segue from the first 5 chapters. Didn't do much but reinforce his doubts, and totally glossed over her betrayal and return to Rob. Completely different emotional feel to the Rob/Kaitlyn relationship, and not for the better. Still have little idea how the situation came about in this chapter.

Good chapter!

5

Good to see this continue. Thanks

As usual another 4 star effort!

Introduction resulted in great expectations, however this effort left me disappointed. All other chapters earned well deserved 5 stars. Unfortunately not this time. Still looking forward to the story continuing.

The gap between 1 and 2 wasn't covered sufficiently and this felt like it was written by someone else. 3*

Great opening!! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Well that was weak. So the MMC and ALL his friends and employees to include some government people KNOW/KNEW there was a major crime ring going on.

So the family ONLY had TWO security sitting in an SUV.

This is so headed for a dumpster fire.

I agree with what OffRoadDiesel wrote.