All Comments on 'It All Goes Wrong, Pt. 02'

I love it. Can't wait for the sequel

Well written and with characters developed well enough that the story can go in any number of directions. I'm looking forward to seeing these ladies develop and help each other figure out who they are. Nice foreshadowing of future developments.

Some times accidents / incidents happen for a reason. Love the story line. Please next chapter need two see how the rest of the week goes. giggles, Love it.

I binged the first two parts left a comment on the first part. The second part was just as entertaining and am looking forward to future stories!!!

I am truly loving The Story So Far character development is spectacular story itself is wonderful look forward to the next chapter

It was great. As a straight (mostly) male, I can relate to Andie's situation. I would love to be in her shoes for some period of time and enjoy the pleasure that she is experiencing. I hope you continue your story of Andie's adventure. I will be looking for the next installment of your story as I am very excited about hoping she finds that her fantasy will come true.

Thank you,

John/Dani

Transfixed from start to finish. Well written, good pace cant wait for the next.

I enjoyed both chapters to this story and am looking forward to the next chapter. It’s very well written and enjoyable.

Loving ot so far. What happens when Bree shows up? Does she expect an occasional roll in the hay with her ex? Will Andie turn the tables? Or will Bree dominate them both? Will they pick up a submissive man for a one time evening of fun? Whatever happens please dont leave out the kink or make it a boring vanilla love story.

What a wonderfull story - as a closet crossdressing heterosexual male, you pressed all my buttons and I would give anything to be in Andie's predicament.

I'm looking forward to Andie becoming the star saleslady in Keira's boutique, measuring the customers and helping them in and out of their clothes in the changing rooms.

Please continue this great story.

XOXO Rosemary

I have been enjoying this story immensely. Your characters have depth and feelings and aren’t just cutouts thrown on a page for place holding. The backstories of Andie and Keira that are slowly emerging are enchanting and sexually interesting. I think that Keira’s personality as both a dominant and submissive are such an interesting combination while the dichotomy seems Ike it fits so well. I do wonder how Bree is going to react since I believe she thinks that Keira is still hers and as more like a piece of property than a beautiful woman. She will either be angry and possibly violent towards Andie or she might think she can dominate him/her and take her away from Keira. I can’t wait to see how it all plays out.

Lexx xoxo