All Comments on 'It All Started with Amber & Evie'

Nice rewrite of this story..liked the adding of the costume shop but I think it would have been better not adding the other girl he goes with at the end

Another great adaptation of another great story. Keep up the good work and looking forward to more.

Good work. I agree with previous comment about adding Felicia. If he loves Amber so much why? Also, I don't think it mentions them arriving at Felicias place, so it kind of messes with the flow.

Adding Felicia ruined the night. He's been in love with Amber for years. Also, why have Evie tell the prom story if you're not going to use it? Make her earn her fuck by eating out Amber.

Missed opportunity.

Excellent! Going to be interesting when Sis gets him home. I see a tag team in his future. 5*****

Sorry, but I didn't really care for the original all that much and was hoping that you could improve upon it. 😔 Sadly, that didn't happen. This was even worse! I think that I even found typos from the original that you didn't bother to correct either. 🤔 I'm so disappointed because some of your other reboots were pretty good. 1/5

I wasn't to bad compared to the original. If I don't compare the two it's a great start of a series to be. 🙊🙉🙈

Liked the story, well done.

I think a play on this theme would have been good but not really enough variation to make it meaningful. Some spots were verbatim cut'n'paste. Always points for the attempt though.