All Comments on 'It All Started with Coffee'

6’ 9” tall and weighs 150 lbs???

You lost me at 6' 9" and 152 pounds and her 36H breasts. You have absolutely no concept of the human body----sizes and weights. To be that tall and not be over 200 lbs would be VERY thin----no way in the world "strapping" as you claim. 36H??? C'mon now, there are SOME women out there with such enormous breasts-----not many, though. This whole writing was a farce!

Body sizes and descriptions are important. Why not make her 3'8" with basketballs on her chest? Or make him an amputee that has a joint in the middle of his junk so he can walk on it.

How is someone 6'9" and 152# . The young man would look sick and unable to function. If you are going to be a author pay attention to detail. One star

Didn't get past the 6' 9", 152 pounds. Get real.

As others have mentioned, the kid's 6-9, 152 pounds almost made me quit reading. Other details include two different sizes for her breasts; the fact that Julian made remarks saying hers was the best pussy he's known -- yet he was a virgin-- and the "next day" she went to school in a professional altered business suit to accentuate her new sexuality. Does she have a seamstress on 24-hour call retainer? It may be just me, but I don't like stories where sudden sexual prowess is prompted by some mysterious ingredient -- and you never said what that ingredient was, or why the woman who offered it, did so. You have potential, just avoid such extremes and your stories will be more easily followed.

This garbage is a teenage boy's wet dream. Everything about it is unrealistic. You wish Ju;ian could be that large, or his mother's hyper-inflated chest could once again produce milk like when she nursed him as an infant.

Thanks for the free comedy

Very poor writing.

Don't quit school...

This book needs a do-over. Horrible

So unrealistic as to be unreadable.

Despite that I worked my way through the whole story - while being grateful that it was only two pages long - in the hope that it would improve...but it didn't. If anything it just became ever more weird and impossible and sad.

I won't enlarge in other comments about sizes, except to add that she apparently started with 32J tits and then changed them to 36H size.

The only redeeming feature was that the spelling, grammar and layout was fine.

Huge tits. Baseball bat for cock. That lost me.

13" cocks are one thing, but that is in the running for one of the dumbest physical descriptions on this site.

Who cares about the literature preciseness or political correctness. You did a good job explaining call Mom sucked his prick beautifully and drank his come lovingly. I could Envision the size of her gorgeous soft tits. I could also see her loving pussy lips. I could almost taste her juices

So subtracting his 13" cock, he was 6'9" and 140 lbs.

Very strapping.

8 hrs of sex with a 8" cock dream on

Her tits go from 32J to 32H. I get they are next to each other on a keyboard, what you should get is an editor, another thing, what teenager doesn't know what a pussy is? Waste of time.