All Comments on 'It All Started with Just One Click'

A good story spoiled by some stupid and unrealistic dialogue e.g. "She even yelled that she was my slut a few times" - "I want to be your cum slut".

wonderful sibling romance and maybe a baby soon.

wonderful sibling romance and maybe a baby soon.

Good first story. Keep it up.

Great story there has to be more chapters

Need to get some one to proof read your writing

Dam I love a LOVE STORY

We need to hear about the island trip. And how they find a way to be “married”.

6*

Tc

A few paragraphs in and he already makes a comment that anyone with even basic social interaction skills would never make to anyone much less a sibling regardless of how they felt. It just fell apart from then on

Awkward narrative in the first page put me off a bit. There was too much time spent on the setup of events and such and not enough on their connection and path forward. The sex scenes were decent, but again, little emotional depth linking them together. 4* overall

Shit hot piece of work! Nice work-up that led to the ultimate taboo, but by far the best addition was the thigh-highs with only one hitch - self-support or garter and snaps? Self-support are my fav as they accent and highlight the gams. 5* and waiting for more.

Very hot! Love the stockings. Please continue this story.