by itsmagic1954
Sounds a real classy lady. He is yet another weak, idiotic example of manhood continually portrayed on this site.
It’s surprising how many nee one story cucks seem to be eagerly joining this site?? Is it in the air? Or is the US producing only cucks genetically??
What a surprise: hubby is a closet queer and the wife os an unrepentant adulterous.
He should get a divorce so he can suck cock all night and take it up the ass, and she can find someone who wants her to be faithful.
Oh look another first time writer writing about being cucked and having a skank for a wife. Nothing to see here.
Yes, the thing about the idiots keeps coming true. They don't want to die out as this author and his story prove! 1*!
WOW, what a great, if short first story. Welcome to the fold.
I don't recall a single word-level gaff which proves you slow-proof carefully.
I could enjoy future follow-ons with this couple, where she gets more and more sexual with more and more men.
Keep 'em coming.
It will be one of the last two as she discovers she didn't marry a man but a wimp who would let another man fuck her. She'll find a real man or just go back to the one she slutted herself with the night before and you'll be history. Or, if she stays you can just try to live with being used by a selfish whore who keeps you around for your $.
What is the point of using condoms? Clearly not to avoid disease and the husband would probably want her to become pregnant as he is not a real man.
If you're going to write cuck stories have the decency to tag them as such. This garbage belongs in fetish. Just another story about a skank slut married to a wimp husband. Nothing new or exciting here folks, move along. 1*
I got to the visit with the exlover and stopped. Please label your cuck material as such.
ROFLMAO@ the anonymous plebs who frequent this site posting nothing but sour comments. Lets see you do better, write something sowe can all see just how sad you really are.
Nicely done first story. I would enjoy hearing more about this couple. Ignore the haters and delete there comments.
Odiouser commended the author for "slow-proof" [reading] carefully. I'll disagree, since there were numerous punctuation errors, and the wife couldn't have her "breasts" pressed up against their drunk friend, unless she actually turned to face him. Otherwise it was her " right breast" Petty? Perhaps, but distracting to some of us. As for the story itself, it was excellent. I find her tease very exciting, and fowling her wedding ring with another man's semen erotically degrading. 5 stars. I look forward to chapter two, and hopefully soon. Thanks.
RAAC is okay but you really need to put some drama in your stories; it wouldn't hurt to try to make them more believable. In fiction we can take a lot of liberty with reality but we needs to keep things within the bounds of suspension of belief. (Do you really know or have you heard of a couple who acted like you wrote?) According to the grapevine we have a lot of wife swapping going on in our small community, but apparently all of our men want action when the wife is getting it.
Anyway, don't get discourged--keep on writing! cd
I think the story is exactly what I would expect in the Loving Wives category. I don’t understand comments that criticize the authors and characters when the wives and/or husbands step out of the bounds of wedlock. Isn’t that the very point of Loving Wives stories?
Not too bad, but the writing style of his first-person narration doesn't go well when describing details of her affair when he wasn't there. It wasn't really an affair, since he gave her permission (aka 'Hall pass') with the condoms. Also, the condom cum sucking he does at the end does scream that he's at least Bi, and not a straight husband. But I'll give it a 4 as your first story.
First of all I would never give my girlfriend or wife a hall pass. Second of all if she put our engagement ring or wedding ring in a used condom no matter who used it I would be divorced asap. What a stupid shit!
a Cuck, and a queer cuck, at that. A possible fair story turned into a -4 * !
Excellent. I could be her, a craven exhibitionist with a husband who encourages me. Only seldom do I fuck another man, and always with my husband's permission. Thanks very much.
Delete the personally insulting comments.
If that was the most intense teasing and fucking session of your lives , so far, I sure wouldn’t tell anyone about it , unless you’re looking for sympathy, either way you have mine!
very erotic first story.
Warning! You will attract haters because of it. Ignore them
Hot story. Sharing is not my thing but if both are into it why not . Hopefully he gets to also .