All Comments on 'It Began with the Hot Tub Ch. 01'

Many family members have been helping each other out these days. A lot of things can be done without going all the way. There is really not a compelling answer to

"If we love each other, why can't we bring each other pleasure?"

I look forward to the next part of your story & keep up the good work.

great start cant wait for more

minimal amount of build up. first night they use it and mommies like oh yeah stroke that dick for me baby. come on. I'll keep an eye out for chapter 2 and hope for the best. huh, oh, ughh, um,

Will post the next chapter today but want to say thank you for the support so far!

I appreciate the build-up is slow and there will be a few chapters to come... However I hope you stick with it!

I really liked it. I appreciate the slow build up and the detailed description. It's a nice change that the mother doesn't have huge 48EE tits, the son doesn't have a 12" cock or that they didn't fuck the first time their feet hit the water in the hot tub. I'm on to chapter two. Five stars and a favorite point!

One of the best build ups I have ever read , you have me hooked ! Getting a 5 from me.

A very nice start with this story. Thanks for sharing this story with us.

An interesting start to this tale....Looking forward the next chapter.....Thank you for the fine writing!

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You like that word, don't you.