All Comments on 'It Could Be Worse Ch. 01'

Wrong category.

this story belonged in something wimp Bondage

....now she's any man's woman, especially if it included humiliating the poor fool that went from her boyfriend to her roommate.

Poor sap is sunk and within 24 hours, everyone on campus will know... The pretty boys will invite him to all their parties, because he's such a slut and give good head....

And that's about where this rather flat-footed story is surely headed. If you had put any effort at all into personalizing the characters, it might have been interesting enough to engage us. As it was, I recently listened to weather reports with more excitement.

You need an editor to catch errors, such as John saying 'my girlfriend' multiple times.

This isn't a LW story...1st - she was barely is girlfriend, nothing more than that...2nd - he was gay all the way...3rd - So not even a hint of love, respect or caring in this story...Just a bunch of soulless people in it...1*

First off, wrong category, put this in gay male. Second, she doesn't love him so why would he believe it? Third: I don't care how hot she is, some guy, somewhere is tired of putting up with her shit. So why would he eat hers? No really? What makes her so special that he would accept being treated with such disdain? What does she do that it's worth being degraded?

What else ?

gay cuck shit.

Gave it a 5 for content and effort. Eat shit annony!!

but did you have to deceive us? That really hurt.

This couldn't be worse. Why is this in LW's?

VOTE 1* FOR EVERY STORY RATED BY THAT TRANNY BITCH FOOL VASTIESMITH2 AKA BONNIETAYLOR2 AKA ANON!

names!! I gave this a 5 to help offset the asshole of LIT!'s 1

Hey bonnie/vastie, what I really think is that's ok to call YOU a cunt whore, you moron!!!

a 5 for effort and content and for pissing off the asshole of LIT dear annony!!

Hey annony, go back sucking cocks and drinking cum. YOU are becoming the asshole of the Internet. We all know it and you have no friends here but the cucks you say you hate so much. You're their leader. So go clean out your woman's cunt and drink that cum baby you will soon have tits

This was just dreadful, awful, horrible, nasty - I wish I hadn't wasted the time it took to read it !

Where's the wife? Wrong category, dickwad.

for pissing off the asshole of LIT!

when you could be sucking dick!!!!!! 5 for a good LW story

Although I can't begin to understand the mindset necessary to experience sexual excitement while being humiliated and disrespected, it doesn't change the fact that you've written a fairly good story with great appeal to that genre. The terms "consenting" and "adult" are really all that's necessary when people interact sexually. Thanks for your effort. ****

If you are a fag.

Once again, you keep using that phrase. It doesn't mean what you seem to think it means. Quite the opposite, in fact.

You can't even get it posted in the right place. No loving wives or any other kind of wife here. And if you're going to put the Gay crap in it, at least post a warning or post it in Gay Male. When she wanted him to suck a guys cock he did what any guy would have done. He bit the guys dick off and sent the bitch packing. After all she has no love or respect for him. She's just using him. God awful story, badly told.

No stars because even giving this garbage 1 star would be an insult to the star.

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Harry in VA's Witness

Loved the humiliation of the man in front of his girl. And having experienced the wet pussy after another man fucks my wife, I totally get the cumming on contact.

One who disrobe the lover of wife and her too and bthen sucks both before their fucking and later too

1* for EVERY story voted 5 by vastiebonnieanonyasshole, ALL writers need to delete THEIR comments if you want ANY chance at a half way decent score.

No matter how bad, it can always be worse. I was talking about work. I think, hope your going to show us.

Who's Jessica ?

Vote 1* for 𝐓𝐇𝐄 𝐅𝐀𝐓 𝐃𝐔𝐌𝐁 𝐓𝐑𝐀𝐍𝐍𝐘 𝐖𝐇𝐎𝐑𝐄™ (that's what her clients call her) aka BONNIE/VASTIE aka ANON!

to offset the biggest asshole on LIT, dear annony. HIs blood dumb comments just shows how fucked up in the head this old ugly fat gay cock sucker is.

LOL!

get rid of the bitch she is just another whore

What is wrong with this bitch of wife

She should be slept for hours for this shit

And what the hell is wrong with him

Has he no feelings is he psychic ill.

How can you write this. It don't only make no one horny but it also is a disgusting shit without sense love and humanity

Please if it don't became betterdont write this story to the end

Evil been putting out his particular brand of garbage for a long time.

My wife and I enjoyed this well-written and highly erotic story. Cindy was a sharp gal, and from the very beginning, she sensed her husband’s needs. Your story logically developed to its climax. And it ended with a clever bet between the wife and Stan!

On our second date, my wife discovered that I was excellent at cunningness and highly desirous of pleasing her that way. She remarked, “Your almost too good at this. You almost enjoy it too much. But I’m certainly not complaining!”

On our third date, after I had cum in her, I rolled her over on top of my face, put her in cowgirl position, and encouraged her to fuck my face. Looking up at her luscious breasts bouncing, and her smiling face, was rewarding. Again, she remarked, “Your almost too good at this. You almost enjoy it too much. But I’m certainly not complaining!”

On our fourth date, I took her out dancing. After a few dances I begged off that I was tired and encouraged her to dance with other men. Every time she would come back to our table after a dance, I would dare her to be more ‘frisky’ with the next guy. All night I was taunting her about being too conservative, to ‘goody goody two shoes’ and daring her, double daring her, and triple daring her.

Pretty soon, she was being groped, kissed passionately, and she was grinding her pussy on their legs. After the last dance of the night, she grabbed me, the guy she had been dancing with, and we went out to the car. She leaned over the hood, dropped her panties, and told him, “Fuck me, Fuck me good; right now!” And he did!

Afterwards she dragged me into the back seat of our car and face fucked me cowgirl style. She smirked and said, “Oh, baby! I know where you want to go with this relationship, and I’m on board 100%!” Then, she invited him into the back seat with us and she guided my face toward his cock.

I sucked all 10” of his thick cock to erection, and he fucked her for several hours in the back seat, while I drove them around. Before their last go around, she had him literally face fuck me, while I knelt down in front of him.

I was a first for me, but I learned fast. She said, “Your almost too good at this. You almost enjoy it too much. But HE is certainly not complaining!”

Since then, she has always had lovers. With each new one, she has them take me up my ass at least once, “Just so I know the pecking order in the relationship!”

Let me tell you, carrying your wife’s lover’s cum around in your bowels all night does remind me who is the real man! My wife just smirks!

Repugnant.

Its funny you tried to ass yourself off as a cuck and as I posted, you were either mentally ill or gay. You clearly are gay, Im glad your 'wife" found a man that likes women and pussy, you, on the other hand, clearly didnt.

Im glad you left the closet, and Im happy when your wife divorced you it didnt hurt you, other than you were no longer able to live vicariously through her.

So thought you thought you could convince us mentally fit people that not all cucks are the same, the willful ones, like you are more than likely gay, (and theres nothing wrong with that, its just all you cucks keep pretending to love women) afraid to leave the closet and live a very empty life. Here's hoping you found the man of your dreams, and I must add, you were right about one thing in your Cucks arent all the same, smoke and mirrors essay, you certainly didnt deserve pussy, because deserving pussy to you is like most people wanting to be hit in the face with a baseball bat.

I absolutely love this story.

I thought this was a cute story of the coming of age of a cuckold. Others knew what he liked before he realized it.

A fan of sharing, and maybe even some bi action, but not cuck humiliation

You’ve written worse, but not much.

wow super hot.

John's doing life-without inside State Prison, but Cin's days of humiliating him are over. Honor is non-negotiable.