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All Comments on 'It Happened One Rainy Night Ch. 02'

by Satin and Lace

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
beginning of an author

you have a good imagination. however, you need to learn a lot more about grammer, punctuation, spelling and sentence structure. read your stories several days after you write them so that you can correct some of the mistakes.

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailover 17 years ago
erotic trail

I am enjoying your tale (~_~) on a not so rainy night

walkingeaglewalkingeaglealmost 18 years ago
I can't wait for the lessons to continue!

I'm really enjoying this!

Please hurry with more!

Great job!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
We could all use a few poolside sex lessons....

And if it has to be from step-mom....sweet

Anxiously awaiting more,

don87654don87654almost 18 years ago
Good reading! Very, very erotic!

Very erotic! I am "stiff" and naked, anticipating the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Cock tease

The title says it all, tease, write faster!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Keep it coming

Good Story keep it coming cant wait for the next chapter...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
very hot

I love the way you write. You have a great imagination, but very erotic also.

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