All Comments on 'It Happened One Summer'

for your first effort. Enjoyed your story but would have liked more description of the sex. Give us another entry soon.

i thought it was pretty good..went kind of fast to me but good reading overall

into a mentally ill family!!! LOL!

Pretty good story. Man wish I was one of their siblings. The only thing I didn't understand was two girls seems to have been having a lot of fun with each other but the boys were acting like a bunch of chickens. They didn't mind giving BJs but couldn't do anything else that they know was on their minds to do. Oh well another chapter wouldn't e bad either.