All Comments on 'It Only Took Twenty Years Pt. 05'

by WillDevo

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AnnaValley11AnnaValley11about 4 years ago
Great story and a wonderful hook

Such wonderful writing

Thank you

oldpantythiefoldpantythiefabout 4 years ago
Amazing, again!

Thanks for the warning at the start of the chapter. but a little ketchup on the meatloaf never hurt anyone. Sometimes you just have to do what you have to do. Not sure about tasting it, but it does wash off, believe me, it does. Thanks for the continuing story of two lucky and in love people.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Oorah!

Tommy Rhodes was a great minor character. I could hear USMC training in everything he said. Will, are you a Marine in disguise? I trained at Paris Island and served at MCAS Cherry Point myself.

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