All Comments on 'It’s Only Dinner - A TRANSformation Pt. 02'

Chapter was too short and seemed rushed. Give us more

This is definitely awesome, the beginning then how Melissa is finding herself and truly feeling better about herself.😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 excellent work can’t wait for next chapter.

I cannot wait for more!

But as other commenter stated, don’t rush it...lots of spelling errors, grammar mistakes and broken sentences.

Meanwhile, the erotica is hot and the main characters mental struggles are believable within the context of your story!

Good work overall. Just Take your time and Keep on writing!

Please?

Thank you so for the comments and for reading this story! Can’t beat a marriage proposal!

Loved the story. Looking forward to reading more of your stores

Is there going to be a part 3 (4,5,etc...)?

When will you publish the third part?

Are you finished with the story?

Will there be a Part 3?

It’s been over six months. Have you given up on this story?

How does he get from friend to bride?

Please finish this story!!! I love it.

I’m very sorry all. I took a significant hiatus but I am back and I’m going to work on part three. If you’re still here, I appreciate your patience and love you all ❤️

Glad to see your back. I hope all is well.

I’m looking forward to reading more stories from you.

Part 3 posted ❤️ - https://www.literotica.com/s/it-s-only-dinner-a-transformation-pt-03

"keep crusader, sidekick" might that have been intended to reference a cape crusader and sidekick?

The story development is impressive. With the referenced value of the lake house, I was expecting it to be less impressive.

There are, however, quite a few typos that might be attributed to a word completion programme. Again, your editor should catch these.

Are you familiar with Proof Reading? It is something that you must do prior to submission. I have seen a suggestion, here on literotica.com, which was to record yourself reading the story THEN read along while playing the recording. A great way to locate errors that could cost you ratings.

You do display a penchant for this genre. With a few additions to your routine I believe you could do extremely well writing professionally.