by janon314
Would have liked it a lot more if Brooke had managed to avoid being the same sort of skank her mother was early on. Saving her from that life path and having her clean and free of all that baggage would have made this fit the way it ended much better.
Excellent, the first story I have read here in a LONG time that was actually an enjoyable read….
Charming. Well written. You captured the narrator's voice perfectly. 5 stars.
*****Very entertaining storytelling by a very good storyteller. Thanks for sharing.
Interesting story. Something like this almost happened to me. Then she just started using me and wanted to have me take care of her kids so i told her I was done. With her.
An excellent and very entertaining and fun story. Great characters that are easy to
Iike and wonderful story telling. Just an outstanding story and well developed ending. Thanks for your time to write and publish. Cheers