All Comments on 'It Started as an Innocent Massage'

Spoiled by the crap of the condom he should have just pushed is cock in and shot his cum deep up inside her unprotected pussy

This is story land no VD or babies

That way she can drop in for a massage, Dave or no Dave!

Maybe he would have gotten more

A good storyline, but the language is too formal. Use contractions like people do went actually talking.

Give her a key and you’ll get to fuck her again...

Hell no what you people live in your mom's basement? Give her the key and she and Dave will be fucking at his place. SMH !!!!

I'm also on team "give her the key" XD

Also, there were s couple parts in there that were choppy like when you were transferring from one scene to the next on the first page. There were maybe two typos? Other than that, this was really quirky and I liked it a lot.

I think its a good story -- now its time to get things out in the open and his sister did. Hopefully, when she asks for a key again he will say Yes and then he can let his sister come surprise him ! Climbing into his bed at night and suck him off and screw him well and hard, often. Maybe they'll become a couple ??? Thank you !

It ended too soon,will we ever find out,

if LILY and DAVE stay togather??.Or

will LILY get her own key. Good read,

...THANKS..

I liked it but why not say panties instead of knickers. That sounds more erotic and sexual.