All Comments on 'It Started Innocently Enough'

Why do so many males equate male submission with the wholesale destruction of the individual and portray the domme as a sadistic black widow type?

It is a nice intro to what looks like a series of changes to cum for Jake.

Nice first entry! As for the criticism "domme as a sadistic black widow type" This is strictly fantasy and most men would accept whatever came along from desperation.

Really enjoyed this - hope you will continue!

4 stars so far! A bit more teasing and detail and it 5+! Thanks for a great story,

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Cliff-hanger endings are both blessing and curse. I admit that I was really into the story.

The story is a good one. Definitely the correct category. Good writing.

Hopefully you will share more of this woman as she leads her sub deeper.

Loved your story ... looking forward to some follow-up stories. Keep up the good work

More please... PLEASE !!!!!