by thremuff
Loved your story ... looking forward to some follow-up stories. Keep up the good work
Cliff-hanger endings are both blessing and curse. I admit that I was really into the story.
The story is a good one. Definitely the correct category. Good writing.
Hopefully you will share more of this woman as she leads her sub deeper.
4 stars so far! A bit more teasing and detail and it 5+! Thanks for a great story,
j
Nice first entry! As for the criticism "domme as a sadistic black widow type" This is strictly fantasy and most men would accept whatever came along from desperation.
It is a nice intro to what looks like a series of changes to cum for Jake.
Why do so many males equate male submission with the wholesale destruction of the individual and portray the domme as a sadistic black widow type?