All Comments on 'It Started with 2, X-Mas Day'

Waiting to hear the dad's are fucking around so the ladies can divorce them.

Wow... the Christmas Day story has to be my favorite since the original (although I really like parts 2 - 4). Keep up the good work!

Another 5* installment; the series keeps pushing the right buttons for me. At least for now, it is a real harem story with the guy satisfying his females so fully that they don't need any other men. I love that almost all the females in the harem are the most important ones in the guy's life. A true harem with mother, son, daughter, sister, aunt

, and cousin incest (my favorite ones), I can't ask for anything better. I wish the story doesn't get ruined in future installments, for example, by opening the group to other guys, by breaking the group into smaller groups, by adding drama/tragedy... Till now it is perfect for me. I'm curious about what's gonna happen with the fathers; I'd be delighted if they get out of the picture definitely.

WOW, I just finished reading this series to date and I'm very happy again for all of your hard work. I really like how you write, the storyline is hot, the characters are fun, and it makes you want to be part of it all. There were a few little things that a little better editing would catch but overall it was fantastic. Thanks for writing it's much appreciated, I'm sure many "members" enjoyed this also. I'm looking forward to the next episode.👍😁

Please, do continue with this story. It's really well written with the different scenes and the character building. I would like to read about something of the main character's experience in martial arts while trying to protect his family/harem. I think it would bring a different kind of excitement to the story that would be fun to read.

"She groans as I move my hips forward and feed her another few inches until I hit the obstruction that is her Hymen."

Yet another story perpetuating the myth of an internal hymen. If Dylan was several inches inside Mel, he was already several inches PAST her hymen. The hymen is at the entrance of the vagina, NOT somewhere inside. It especially bothers me when female authors apparently don't know their own anatomy.

And bringing in the pizza girl is just a step too far for me. Now up to servicing SEVEN women, the ladies are going to be noticing diminishing returns no matter how much of a stud Dylan supposedly is. There are only so many hours in a day and days in a week. And whatever happened to Dylan be exclusively theirs (the original three)? It's not very exclusive if they keep allowing him to add new conquests. Since the initial pact, he's more than doubled the group. I was OK with bringing in mom, aunt and cousin, since this IS an incest story, but adding the pizza girl, too, is just ridiculous.

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Sexcellente rework/rewrite of the original series!

11/10!!!!!

I love your take on this story please continue this series.

Love the series. Hope to see more soon. I could see Felcia and Amber being curious about bringing their mom's in too.

I would love to read the next installment of this story.

Needs a finish......

Good variation but please enumerate the stories so they can be viewed properly.

Waiting for the next installment.