All Comments on 'It Started with a Jar of Cum'

Great Story, Captivating.

Great story. Got me wet for sure. I would have gladly taken her place playing the game!

Fun story with interesting plot. I would try not to use the characters names every sentence as it makes the story read more like a script than a story. Once a paragraph has identified which character we are with it’s not necessary to write their name out every time you tell the reader what they are doing or thinking. Dialogue tags also tend to flow better after the quoted speech not before.

Oh lord, my pussy is dripping, I loved this story.