All Comments on 'It Started with Two, Then Became Four'

I love it although I'd like the dad to get out of the picture. If something ruins a story for me, that is other guys getting into the mix. The mother making compatible husband and son would be a big NO for me. Will the aunt and the cousin be new members of the harem???

Loving the rewrite hope you keep going with it

An amazing update! Keep up the good work.

Outstanding !!!!!

This is getting better each story. Just don't jump the shark.... more please.

Definite continuity error. First he removes his mom’s blouse to reveal her emerald green bra(w) and then a little later he removes her blouse (again) to reveal her black bra!

Great update to a good story, please finish the series.

So the mother cheats on the father by letting his own son cuckold him. There is nothing sexy or good about any of this. It's one of the main reasons why I rant about LEAVE MOMMY OUT OF IT. You had the potential for a good brother/sister incest story and I was okay with you expanding it into a harem story. My own TGND is in that genre. But now you're writing a Loving Wives story and that crap doesn't belong in an incest story. 🙄 1/5

I don't mind that the story is told in first person. Many are. What bugs me is that you keep bouncing between present tense and past tense, often within a single sentence. Pick one and stick to it throughout the story.

The other thing is that, in this chapter, Dylan penetrates his mother's cervix. If he did, she would be screaming alright...in pain. The cervix is not meant to be penetrated by a penis. I researched this after reading it in other stories. The medical conscientious is that it would cause the woman excruciating pain. Yes, it softens and opens up during child birth, but otherwise it's pretty much a closed door to penetration.

That being said, I am enjoying the story overall.

I liked the variance of the storyline so far your keeping to the original and giving the story your kinks. (FIVES)

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