All Comments on 'It Starts As An Idea'

Now try to write a story! This sucks!!

Previous poster was an idiot. this was a very good story, albeit written in an unusual style. keep up the good work.

I loved the odd format (it would get old after a while, but as a one-shot it works). The "Best Thread ever/ Grow up" part definitely added to the realism. :D Plus, you set yourself up for a sequel if you wan to, or to leave it alone if you wish as well.

I was looking forward to him finding out that he was her step sister by looking at the prev. posts and stuff after i found out that he was...want sequel to see him do thatsoon. Have fun!

-A.

Great story... liked its unconventional style ... I think it is gud as one off story... A sequel would kill the novelty of the style and it may read boring

never ever post a story like this again you should be ashamed of yourself. this was just as bad as the idiots that use text speak. total waste of time and space this would have been better left unposted.

I normally don't like transcript stories because they are usually stiff and sound unrealistic/impersonal, but this one actually sounds like it really happened. I wouldn't like to read other stories like this mind you, but this is a welcome change of pace. Also, it was great that 'naughtysiren' had a 'good' ending.

I liked it. ^.^ Well written and well thought out. Different and enjoyable. Not erotic imo, but a nice story. ^.^

hey slut go to the nearest sherriff's office and turn your sorry ass in. only you need to be jailed since you lied like a dog to your brother basically.