All Comments on 'It Was Always Meant to Be'

Very hot start and well done for your first story. Please keep going with these two and hopefully they can make it work out for them.

Has potential but needs work

Good first story but it needs another chapter or two. Keep on writing.

Way too short.....

Please continue.

It moved entirely too fast and therefore became instantly unbelievable. The newest writer who doesn't have the balls to allow scoring. 2*

More please!!

My guess is that you've tried this before, and having failed, made the conscious effort to turn off voting so you won't need to look at abysmal ratings again.

Grammar isn't your strong suit. Neither is creativity. This was such a sad attempt at an old tripe that all aspiring writers who have no hope of fulfilling that aspiration seem to think is either creative or original and is neither.

Baisez là dur dans l'hôtel , Evry dur dur hard rock

Waiting for more!

Proof? Proof readingi is badly needed:

"wouldn't have never approved of. The skirt were too short "

Good Start. Keep going... Don't let the Troll's get to you.

No voting? For your first story? Something is not right about this. First, there is only 1/2 a story. There is no back story, none. Second, not sure why you think finger fucking someone while driving down the freeway is erotic? Lastly, this is such a memorably bad cliche'd storyline, I feel like I have seen this abbreviated story submitted before....

Too quick. Needed some background

Just finish you’re fine