All Comments on 'It was Always You'

Wrong category!

Disagree with Nasty56 - I liked it a great deal

Well done on your debut.

Looking forward to reading your next tale of repressed desire

If HE surprised her with the trip, why was he asking her about the accommodations?

First story!

4

10 years? That was about 9 years too long to be believable. Only the last 10% of this story was remotely romantic.

Very good story! If this is your first story, all I can say is that I really look forward to more of your work. Thank you for sharing your work!

Damn good. Please keep writing!

Nice one. Hope to see more of your stories.

Two quick pieces of general advice, no problems with this story.

1 pay attention to details, particularly names and time frames. Those pull the reader out of the story.

2 if you want to self edit read what you think is your final draft out loud. Doing so engages your brain differently and makes you read what's on the page rather than what's in your mind.

Thank you. Keep'em coming!

Very good for Matt to reveal his feelings. Many "just friends" are afraid to make the first move. better to take a chance and regret it

Hop there is a second chapter

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Que Romantique!

11/10!!!!!