All Comments on 'It Was Fate'

You've left me hanging.and with a stud.fuck i need more,who is the vampire stud? And am guessing thats his mate ? Need more.....please

The writing is a little rough; an editor would probably pick up on the punctuation, etc. But great start and interesting premise.

You've got the beginning of a great story. Keep up the great work!

I'm looking forward to more.

Bring it...

As far as grammar and story line this is much better than the original version (Fate) so far. Great start, I look forward to reading the rest.

THERE IS NO SEX AT ALL THROUGHOUT ANY OF THE CHAPTERS.

The author jumps from character to character amd barely gives one pair a chance to really build in the story.

And of course, its unfinished.

Dont waste your time, you'll just be highly disappointed.